Wednesday, January 7, 2015

Chapter Nine of The Hare, The Bow and the Girl "The Burrow"

 
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Nine – The Burrow
 
I wandered back to the fair in a daze. “Eric?”

I had walked right past Jet in front of the archery range, not even seeing them in my fog of love..  “Oh, hey. What’s up?”

“You tell me. This is the third time today I’ve been back here looking for you. I thought maybe someone from last night’d recognized you and you ended up in the keep. Where the heck have you been?”

“I, uh, well,” I pointed vaguely back the way I’d come, “was practicing.”

“With that girl from yesterday, huh? I knew it! That would explain the dazed look. Watch out for fair romances. Eric. They’ll get you in the end.” I smiled and Jet gave me a dirty look, “Crud. You’re in deep, aren’t you?. What’s her name?”

“Karn. She’s amazing, Jet. I think I’m—”

“Save it, lover boy. She’s bound to break your heart.” Jet said.

“You don’t even know her, Jet. She’s an amazing shot with the bow.”

“Eric, do you know her? What, you met her when—yesterday? Heck, on that level you and I should be married.”

“Not like that, Jet. You ever been in love, Jet? It’s like magic.”

“Have you ever been in love is more like it. That’s puppy love, mister. Anyway, I guess Walter and I will pick up your broken heart regardless. Come on, we’re going someplace new.”

“Where? Another tavern? ‘Cause if I am being honest, last night was not that much fun for me.”

“No, no more taverns for now; too much going on. Nope, this is better; quieter. It’s a place not many folks get to see. Shush and follow me, lover boy.”

Jet and I left the fairgrounds and went back down the road we had followed into town. After a little ways we veered off the road, pushing through a hedge. On the other side was a narrow, barely noticeable pathway that wound down a bank from the road. We walked for about 15 minutes. Jet said nothing—she was good at that. The pathway often almost disappeared altogether and it didn’t help that night was falling. Finally we stopped in front of a small bush. I wasn’t sure what was going on and began to feel kind of nervous. If Jet had wanted to do me harm she’d had plenty of chances before—but I wasn’t sure.

“Okay, Eric, serious business now. You gotta swear that you’ll never tell anyone about this, okay?”

“Sure, Jet. But you’re kinda worrying me here.”

“Sorry, Eric. There’s nothing to worry about. It’s just that we’re about to go into a burrow. You know what a burrow is?”

“You mean like a rabbit burrow?”

“Exactly. See, the Lepus like to live away from folks—no sense getting in the way. Most folks don’t know or don’t care where the Lepus live so most have never seen a burrow, and the rabbits like it like that. But I convinced Walter and Path to let you come tonight. So stay calm and watch your step. I guarantee it’ll be a better time than last night.”

“Okay. Andrew told me about them. But, I meant to ask him; how are we gonna fit into a burrow?”

Jet looked at me like I had lost my mind, which I guess I had—Walter was about six feet tall, almost as tall as I was. She turned around and pushed through the bush. Behind it was a large hole, about three feet across, dug into the side of a small hillside cliff, the top of which was about twenty feet up. You did have to kinda duck going through the entrance but once in I was able to stand comfortably in a spacious, long tunnel. I could hear voices echoing from the end of it.

“Come on. This is Satchel’s burrow. She’s friends with Path and Walter and lives with Andrew’s brother, Mike.”

“Okay. Say, why is it that Andrew has such a normal name and everyone else seems to have strange names?”

“Like Walter? Well, anyway, good point, long story. Some other time. Now, relax. You’ll be fine.”

That was the second time she’d warned me. It wasn’t helping.

We came to the end of the corridor and it opened into a large living area. In one corner was a full-fledged fireplace with a roaring fire. The walls were bare earth, but covering some of them were tapestries or colorful bolts of cloth. All around sat Lepus, either leaning up against the wall or just sitting on large pillows. There was no other furniture. In one spot there were baskets with vegetables and pots with steaming stews.

Since arriving in the valley I had never seen more than four rabbits together but here there were easily a couple dozen, with all sorts of colored coats, from midnight black to pure white. Most, however, were some sort of grey mixture with perhaps a splash of black or white or brown.

The air was heavy and thick, filled with smoke from the fireplace but also from what I learned were pipes full of lavender. The Lepus smoked it to relax. The smell was overwhelming at first, but as I stood on the threshold I slowly adjusted to the smell and the lack of light besides the fire. I also learned that Lepus have excellent night vision and prefer low lighting. What I could not get used to was the chatter of many voices, almost all speaking in Lepus, which of course I could not understand. The noise was not ugly, but sounded so foreign on my ears that my head soon began to hurt. I found it better to just try and tune the sound out.

Jet went in first and I assumed I would slip in and sit beside her someplace, but as soon as I came into the large area Walter’s booming voice rang out above the chatter.

“Jet! Eric! Welcome. Come in Eric, don’t be shy!”

Of course that made me immediately feel about as shy as I could be, but I stepped in and tried to smile now that every rabbit’s eyes were on me.

“Everyone, this is Eric!” Walter said as he hopped towards me. He then repeated it in Lepus. A friendly murmur went up from the crowd. As Walter came closer he put a paw on my shoulder.

“Come on, Eric. Come sit with Path and I. I’ve been telling everyone about you—all good, I promise.”

 “Really?”

“Oh sure; I told ‘em all about how your sloppy shooting accidently saved my life!”

“Great. Did you also mention me saving your life again last night? Or was that an accident too?”

Walter laughed and nudged me into a far corner by the fire.

Most of the crowd had turned back to their conversations, but more than a few rabbits kept looking in my direction. Jet had already made herself at home next to Path talking to another girl, much to my surprise. I don’t know why I thought we were the only people here.

“Eric, this is Grace. She’s a friend,” Jet said as I came close.

            I smiled and nodded at a slight girl, who seemed younger than Jet and certainly less hard-edged. She had long brown hair that was tied up in a fancy hairdo. She and Jet quickly resumed talking.

I sat down next to Walter and Path, the rabbit I had met briefly the night before at the drinking tent. He had been with the others around the campfire afterwards. Path was brown with a dark, almost black, stripe running down his back. He has green eyes and a black nose.

“Hello, Eric. Good to see you again. Sorry to cut and run last night. Tonight should be less, exciting—I hope!”

“Hi Path. Nice to meet you, again.  Yeah, I hope it will be quieter. That was not what I call fun.”

He laughed a hearty laugh. “So Eric, tell me the story of how you got here. Walter says you fell out of the bamboo forest. Is that possible?”

“I guess. I mean, I did. I don’t rightly know how I got here. I was just walking and before I knew it I crossed a creek and tumbled out into a field. Next thing I know I see giant rabbits and people.”

“Bet that was a shock. I know; I’ve been there.”

I was confused. “What do you mean?”

“I’ve been to the other side. I know how small us Lepus are over there.”

“Really? You’ve been back home? I mean, where I’m from? Why?”

“Some of us have gone there from time to time. Not especially welcoming though.”

He response was hurried, nervous, only later did I realize he had avoided the question.

Walter came back by this time with several mugs, “Beer. None of that cider junk. And help yourself to some bean stew. It’s good stuff.”

“Thanks. So is this some sort of tavern then?” I asked, after taking a deep draft of the quite good if not exactly cold beer.

“Nope, it’s Satchel’s place.”

I was about to ask who Satchel was, exactly, other than being related to some other rabbits I barely knew,  when Path cut in.

“So, Eric, sorry to press, but did you know about here before you came? Did someone tell you about it?”

“Uh, no. I had no idea. Like I said, I was just out walking—”

“Hunting rabbit more like it,” Walter said with a dismissive laugh.

Path snorted, “So that’s what Walter’s problem is then! You should be able to handle a kid like this Walter!” Path was laughing, mostly at Walter, I think.

“Look…,, ” I started defensively.

“It’s okay, Eric,” Walter cut me short. He glared at Path. “We’ve both been there, to your side of things. We understand things are different. The most important thing is you are here now and you seem like a decent sort. What is past is past. Plus I can handle you.” Walter laughed.

“If he would just stop saving your life for a moment you might show him” Path said, snorting even louder this time.

Walter glowered at Path but then broke out into a broad smile.

“Path, your ledger with me is a mile long. Pay him no mind Eric.  Here, try the stew already.”

The steaming hot stew was good: beans flavored with a hearty hot spice, with a slice of rich, white bread on the side. I had more than I should and a few more beers too. Walter and Path talked about where their jobs had taken them recently: Walter’s, all over; Path’s, down to the Southern desert. Like Walter, Path was a guard, in his case tax collectors. They talked about people I didn’t know, often calling them their Lepus names, using odd sounds, clicks and even nose twitches to say words that I could not follow. It dawned on me why Lepus had such common names, they were not their real names but rather English names so that people could say them. I asked Walter what his Lepus name was. The group fell silent. I wondered if I had committed some sort of social faux pas. Walter tilted his head and looked at me with a slight smile.

“In all my days I don’t think a human has ever asked me that Mr. Eric.” Walter said, half laughing, half in disbelief.

“Well, I just figured.. It’s no big deal.” I stammered.

“No, no. Here, I will say it, but watch all that I do, not just what I say.”

Walter twitched his nose to the left and made a sharp clipped clucking sound in his mouth. He smiled.

“Got it?”

“Uh, maybe.” I tried, best as I could, to twitch my mouth to the left while imitating the clucking sound. There was a moment of silence and then all the rabbits around me broke out in laughter. Walter laughed the hardest.

“Well!” Path bellowed, “I don’t know about you Walter, but I wouldn’t let someone insult my mother that way!” and he collapsed  in a  fit of laughter.

I looked in utter confusion, trying to remember what I had done incorrectly…

Walter composed himself and held a paw up to silence the group.

“A very good try little peffa, but you did not watch me closely enough. Watch again.”

He made the twitch and the cluck again.

“And once more.” This time I focused on his body to see if anything else moved and this time I saw it, his left ear twitched too. I rolled my eyes and threw up my hands.

“How in the world am I supposed to do that!” I asked. “I can’t even… my ears don’t go that way!”

This brought on another round of laughter form the group. Path was no crying he was laughing so hard. Walter put a paw on my shoulder.

“No worries Eric, no worries.”

Path drew in a great breath and put both paws on his belly as he leaned back. “Damn better than most, good effort Eric, but, as you see, there are limitations that humans can’t overcome easily.”

I chuckled and Path and Walter looked at me.

“What?” Walter asked.

“I was just thinking, maybe I could get a pair of ears to put on top of my head.”

Walter and Path were stoned faced for a moment but then Path burst out laughing again and soon the whole group joined in. This began another round of animated discussion and laughing about the foils of humans who try to speaks Lepus.  

As the night went on, I was more worn out than I had realized. My tiredness, coupled with the heat from the fire and the strong lavender smoke, made my eyes heavy. AS the fires burned bright and even more rabbits made their way into the clearly too small room,  I was soon  asleep.

I don’t know how long I slept. When I woke up, the fire was still going; the room was full of Lepus and the overwhelming lavender smoke. The room was closing in on me. The air was hard to breathe, the food and cider I ate earlier was not settling in well. I suddenly felt panicked and had an urge to be sick.

I stood up and made my way for the door out as fast as I could. Some rabbit I didn’t know tried to stop me, asking if I was okay. I pushed past and ran down the tunnel to the outside and stumbled into the cold night air, which felt fantastically fresh and clean. I took deep breaths, as if I had been running for a long time, to try and clear out the smoke. I stood up and fought back the wave of rising sick in my stomach. Gradually my heads began to clear. Once the feeling passed I found a small rock to sit on and collected my thoughts.

It wasn’t long before Walter came and sat next to me, putting his furry bulk uncomfortably on the edge of the rock. I scooted over to give him more room.

“You okay?”

“Sure, better now. I don’t know, I felt ill back in there. Too much I guess. Too hot, too much smoke, maybe it was the cider. Not sure.”

Walter did not reply, he just sat looking up at the stars. I looked up too.

“These the same stars as you got, Eric?”

“Seems so. I can’t always pick out the same constellations. But I’m no expert on the stars.”

“Me neither. My father knew them. He told me…”

“What?”

Walter seemed lost for a moment and then came back. “He told me that the stars over the mountain were different than the ones they have here.”

“So… you’re a .. nat?” I asked, cautiously.

Walter chuckled. “Jet filled you in some huh? Yes, my Dad was an over, one of the last.”

“You ever been back.”

Walter took a long time to answer, as if he was giving the matter long and serious thought.

“No” he finally said.

“I didn’t mean to pry.”

“ I know.” Walter said, gently. We sat there in silence for a while. It was Walter who broke the silence.

“You goin’ back?” The question caught me off guard. I hadn’t thought about it much. And what got to me is that I hadn’t thought about it much.

“I don’t know. I guess after last night it might be wise.”

Walter snorted, but did not say anything.

“There’s not much for me back home, you know?” I told him. “My parents died last year—got killed in an accident. Got no brothers or sisters near me. All my friends from school left early, got married. The rest of those kids were from down off the mountain, in town. They might as well lived on the moon.”

“Are people who live on the mountain different?”

“Sure and no. Depends. We stick together. Down in town they got white folk, coloreds, and issues. But up on the side of the mountain we just have neighbors, really. It’s not perfect. We got some mean ones, but generally people are okay. People look after each other. ”

“So why not go back?”

“Dunno. Why should I? No family, just a house on some land. Not even a farm, really. Always felt at loose ends there; like I wanted to leave but couldn’t.”

“Why not?”

“How was I supposed to? Where would I go? I could have gone out West with my brothers, but… really no motivation, I guess. But I got here and it’s all been so easy. I met you guys, everything’s fallen into place, and then there’s Karn.”

Walter, who had been slowly reclining on the rock, sat back up. “Aha! I knew it! You found yourself a little snuggler and it has messed with your mind.” He said it with a smile, but I could tell he was somewhat serious.

“No, it’s different—”

“Eric, you’ve known her for what, two days now?”

“You sound like Jet. It doesn’t matter.”

We sat in silence. I couldn’t offer a defense; he knew better than to push it.

“Ever wonder why you’re here, Eric?”

“You mean like life?”

“No, I mean here, right here right now. Do you know how many people have come from the other side?”

“No. I guess not many, though.”

“Try none. You’re the first person I’ve ever heard of coming through the bamboo. We Lepus go back and forth a bit but not humans.”

“Why? I mean why do you go there?”

“Long story,” Walter said with such finality I knew he wasn’t going to elaborate. After a while I stood up, stretching my legs and yawning.

“Could I even go back then? I mean, is it difficult to go back and forth?”

Walter said nothing, he gave a small shrug. I stood there, in the cold night air, staring at the deep night sky.

“So, Walter, why am I here then?”

“Not sure, Eric, but I don’t think it’s an accident. Some Lepus think that we need a human to speak for us, save us from…the way things are. But I say we gotta fight the fight ourselves.”

 “It would be neat to see where you all came from. But you won’t let us through, right?”

“Right,” Walter said, seeing the look in my eyes, “another long story.

“So you think I’m the guy who is gonna save the Lepus? What from?”

“I don’t know and no, you’re not the guy. I know that much.”

“Wait—why not? Maybe that is why I’m here then. It would make sense—”

“No, it doesn’t. It will have to be someone who is more connected to things and able to talk to those in power.”

“Well, then, I’m off the hook. I guess this makes me just someone you have to lug around then.”

Walter laughed, “It’s getting late, Eric. Don’t worry about your place here just yet. You seem to impress Jet when you wave that damn bow. It might be useful to have you around. You’ll earn your keep I am sure, just not right now. I’ll grab a blanket from inside. You can sleep under the stars tonight.”

Walter hopped back in the burrow and returned a minute later with a large fuzzy wool blanket. I think I was asleep before he even went back down the burrow.

Monday, January 5, 2015

2014 - a pretty good year - about 150k words (more or less)

2014 was a good year for me. This year I:
1. Expanded The Hare, The Bow and the Girl from 30k words to 47k words in a doomed attempt to get attention from Amazon.
2. Finished a 1st and 2nd draft of book two of the Hare, The Bow and the Girl (now with my beta readers) 50k words
3. Half way through book three (about 22k words, got stuck but I think I just got unstuck)
4. Finished first draft of The Levels (working title) a future/mystery/detective novel. About 50k words.
5. Started another book, no title, about "Item Retrieval Specialists" (not thieves!) about 4k words done on that one.
6. Blogged a short story set I'm the Lepus universe.
7. Got another story published http://www.4starstories.com/html/bonus_story7.html

Friday, December 19, 2014

The Hare, the Bow and the Girl - Chapters 7 & 8

Hi
Two shortish chapters this week and probably not another chapter until after the new year. See you in 2015!


Seven  – Trouble Soon Enough

 

Jet and Walter took me to a large tent on the outskirts of the fair. I could hear loud voices, laughter, and sudden shouts coming from the tent. Inside it was decorated with lots of strung candle lit lanterns and there were groups of people sitting on bales of hay drinking from large mugs filled with spiced hard cider. In the middle of the tent a small band complete with an accordion, a fiddle and a man thumping a wooden box played what sounded like waltzes. Through the knots of people I could see large wooden barrels in the back on their side. Large, jolly women stood in front of each, filling mugs with the golden colored liquid.

A few people turned to look at us when we came in—it was difficult to miss Walter’s large body—but most people did not seem to care. We headed toward the side and found a small area away from the crowd. Even so, within moments one of the women came up with a handful of mugs.

“Cider’s all?” Walter asked, shouting to be heard above the din.

The woman shook her head yes. Jet put up three fingers, the woman put up five. Walter handed her some coins and she handed over three full mugs. The cider had a sharp crisp taste, flavored with some spice I couldn’t identify. It felt warm going down. I must have had a smile on my face.

“It is good, no?” Walter bellowed as he swigged the entire mug down and held up a paw for more. The serving maid frowned at him but soon returned with another. A band played somewhere in the crowd adding to the noise and chaos. I sat back and noticed that besides us, there were only people there. Just as I was about to ask Jet, who was next to me, where all the Lepus were a large grey bunny flopped down next to Walter.

“Ay! Path!” Jet called out.

The rabbit smiled in her direction and then began to earnestly chat with Walter. Walter and Path seemed oblivious. I t was fascinating to watch the two of them “talk.” For every sound they made they probably made three or four twitches of their noses or whiskers. Every so often, almost, it seemed, for emphasis, one of them would thump their foot rapidly. As I sipped my cider I began to notice that the thumps were not the same. Sometimes there would be one loud thump, other times a series of thumps, alternating loud and soft. At one point Walter let loose a rapid series of staccato thumps, all the same intensity and the two of them laughed uproariously.

After  a while Walter signaled for more cider. The server now had a very dour look on her face. I noticed a few other people nearby also staring at us; or more precisely, the two rabbits. To the man the people around us had sour looks on their face. A few even got up and moved away, sitting back down at tables across the tent.

“What’s their problem?” I asked Jet, jerking my head towards a table of particularly sour looking men.

Jet laughed and leaned in, “Lepus! Same as everyone else. One by himself is fine; get more than a couple in a room and people get nervous. Think they’re going to cause trouble. They never do, of course—the rabbits, that is. People are another thing. We’ll be fine with just the two of them; it’s when we get three that trouble starts. I just hope Nell doesn’t show.”

“Who’s Nell?”

“The third rabbit,” Jet said, with a look that asked if I were thick.

“Do you think, maybe sometime, you or anyone here could just explain to me what the hell is wrong with the rabbits?” I yelled, trying to get above the noise of the crowd.

“Nothing’s wrong with them!” Jet looked angrily.

I put up my hand flat. “Okay, I get that, but it seems like you and I are about the only ones.”

“Oh, that. Long story. People think they have foxes.”

“Foxes?”

“You know, after them.”

I am sure I looked totally lost.

Jet sighed and pulled closer. “People think the rabbits have foxes chasing after them.”

“Okay, so, people don’t like foxes? I didn’t like them in the chicken coups at home but they’re not gonna cause me any harm.”

“No, not those foxes. Big foxes. Bigger than the rabbits. A lot bigger. Or people say. Never seen one myself, but people think you get too many rabbits around and the foxes come. Load of crap I say.”

“Giant foxes? Wouldn’t they be hard to miss?”

“My point. Oh, no,” Jet looked concerned.

“What?”

“The third rabbit just arrived.”

“Should we go?”

“No, relax. It’s a big crowd. Three will push the limit but—never mind, we’re in trouble. We just got the fourth. Walter!” She shouted and held up her hand, flashing three then four fingers to him. “Eric, how are you with your fists?”

“Been in a couple of scuffles; I can hold my own,” I replied, trying to sound braver than I was beginning to feel.

“Good. Make your way out, and don’t let anyone stop you, clock ‘em if they do. Meet us outside by the large oak. And do not go for your bow. You’ll end up in the keep for sure that way. Just get out of the tent as fast as you can, understand?”

“Wait, Jet; I want to help.”

“Then get out and stay out of the way,” she yelled, maneuvering around the table to get in front of Walter and the three other rabbits. I noticed that the tent had fallen somewhat quiet. Even the band stopped playing. Jet stopped in front of the table and smiled grimly at the small knot of large men with angry faces in front of her. She put her hands up to the crowd.

“No need for such hostility, good people. My friends and I had a drink and now we’re off, we’ll be no bother to anyone if you please?” She motioned with her hand for the men to move aside, but they did not budge.

The smallest of the bunch, teetering on his feet, clearly way too deep in the drink, stepped forward half a step. “Look, little flea. Ain’t you we’re concerned ‘bout; it’s the filthy vermin behind ya. Step off.”

“Get your friend a seat before I do it myself,” Jet addressed the men behind the drunk through gritted teeth. Her voice had grown very cold and quiet, but there was no mistaking the message. “Now let us through and no one will get hurt.”

“Filthy little flea—ugh!”

Jet’s hands quickly boxed the man on his head, sending him down in a pile. It was about then that all hell broke loose. Walter and the three other rabbits made giant leaps for the tent opening, throwing aside several people in the way and a few others who were trying to stop the escaping rabbits. I had probably waited a few seconds too long to begin my escape. A fairly large guy stepped in front of my path. Remembering what Jet told me I wound my arm up and smashed my fist as hard as I could into his stomach. He made a loud noise but did not budge. So I wound my arm up again and this time aimed a bit lower. He doubled over and I darted around him.

Around me was complete chaos. Two burly guys had Walter by his long ears, with one of the men standing on Walter’s legs, the other holding one of Walter’s arms. Both were careful to avoid getting punched by Walter’s wildly swinging free paw.

 The other rabbits were nowhere to be seen; neither was Jet. Instinctively I grabbed a nearby stool and swung it as hard as I could against one of the men, causing him to yell and let go of Walter’s arm. Walter promptly boxed both men hard with his paws and they fell quickly.

“Get out!” Walter screamed, bounding ahead of me, disappearing into the tumult..

“I’m trying!” I yelled as I scrambled for the tent opening.

“Well, try harder!” Walter screamed as I lost him in the crowd.

 I was surrounded by people were yelling and fighting. Well, mostly barkeeps were yelling, trying to restore order before the tent was destroyed. In the confusion people seemed to have lost track of the fact that I was with the rabbits. As I got closer to the door I found myself being carried rather than blocked. I guess a lot of other people had the same idea and within seconds I spilled out onto the ground along with a dozen others.

I didn’t wait around to introduce myself. I bolted up and took off straight ahead into the mass of tents and booths set up in the fairground. I rounded several tents and finally arrived at a quiet and deserted area. Catching my breath I looked around and tried to get my bearings, scanning the horizon for a large oak. I had no idea where Jet and Walter had gone.

I heard voices coming closer. I ducked behind an empty booth to wait for the voices to pass. I could only hear a bit of the conversation.

“Ain’t it always like that? Them boys starting trouble with the rabbits. Why I ask you, why mess with ‘em?”

“Lord knows what them Lepus can do to you when you aren’t lookin’. I says we’d be better off ignoring ‘em.”

“Still, they always seem to find trouble.”

“Trouble finds them. I ain't never seen a rabbit start nothing.”

“We’d be better off without them.”

“And who’d haul your stones Gibson, from the quarry for so cheap?”

“I’d make do.” The man sounded less certain.  

The voices faded as they walked away and I came back out from behind the booth.  It took several minutes to locate the large tree off on the far edge of the fairground, well away from the beer and mead tents in the center. I saw only Jet at first, sitting with her back to the tree.

“Thought maybe you got the pulp beat out of you,” she said with nary a trace of a smile.

“No, I got away, no thanks to you lot.”

“I told you to clear out. Not my fault you stood there like a slack jawed-yokel.”

I ignored her sarcasm. “Where are Walter and company?”

“Down there talking and hiding. We should join ‘em until the commotion fades a little. I doubt anyone will worry too much; not worth the hassle, but you never know.”

I still didn’t see Walter until Jet got up and walked down a slope to where the three rabbits were laying down, murmuring to themselves. They blended very well into the hillside in the dark of the night.

I lay down next to an empty wagon parked at the bottom of the short hill. I was tired, but my mind was racing. Jet sat down next to me, making a small place to settle in directly under the wagon. It was almost like she was nesting for the night.

“You tired, Eric?” she asked.

“Yeah, but not going to go to sleep. My mind is wide awake.”

“I bet. We haven’t talked much since you got here. Must seem a little strange, huh?”

“Yeah, a little.” We both laughed. “It’s not too weird. I mean, it’s like I just crossed a stream, that’s all. But the rabbits do throw me off. What’s up with them really? Andrew didn’t tell me anything at all.”

“He’s good at that, not telling you much, he’s been in the employ of the king’s ministers too long. But yeah, the rabbits. It’s a long story.”

“I’ve got time.”

“Really? I mean, you seem to have fallen in here pretty easily, I would think you’d be eager to get back to where you’re from, especially after tonight.. No one to go back to over there?”

“Nope. No. My parents both died about six months ago. Not much work around those parts either. Seems nicer here, too.”

“Hmmph. Well, must be pretty bleak there if this looks nice.”

“Not so bad back home, but not better either. But anyways, you’re getting away from the story Jet, just like Andrew.”

“Sorry. Habit. So you want to know about the rabbits? The simple is that they showed up about oh, a hundred years ago. Came out of the mountains in the West.”

“You mean, my mountains?” I asked, having no idea what directions were what here.

“No. Well, not that I know of. The bamboo forest where you came from is down South, close to the Galyts desert. See, this land here, in the valley, is surrounded on all sides. Kind of pins us in.”

“What do you mean surrounded? I thought the rabbits came in. I came in.”

“Well, that’s the issue. We can’t figure out how to go beyond this vale. See, to the South is Early, to the East is the great ocean, and then to the North and West are the mountains.”

“So the rabbits came over the mountains?”

“Yes.”

“So why not go back over the way they came?”

“Well, they guard that passage and they’ve never allowed anyone back up. Say it’s too dangerous. But that’s what gets them in trouble.”

“Why?”

“People wanna know what’s over there. But for as long as we’ve had records no one has ever found a passage over the mountains. Some people say that other creatures come over from the mountain with the rabbits.”

“The foxes?”

“Exactly.”

“But no one’s ever seen them?”

“No. Well, no one reputable. And the rabbits aren’t telling. Most of the rabbits here today have never even been over the mountain. They’re called nats—naturalized rabbits. But at the passage you might run into to some overs.

“Rabbits who have been there and back I’m guessing.”

“Yeah. It’s really not a big deal. The rabbits settled in nicely. Most of them live way out in the country in burrows, far from people. But some folks still get itchy about them. Trust issues, I guess. People don’t bother to get to know any of the rabbits and so they can’t trust them. ”

“And that’s why tonight—”

“Exactly.”

“And what was the deal with the flea remark, if you don’t mind me asking.”

Jet grunted and spat on the ground. “It’s crass. Ugly. Fleas are women who, uhm… live with rabbits.”

“Oh. And do you…I mean, are you and Walter…?”

“What?” Jet scowled and then her face softened and she laughed. “Well, okay, okay. I guess it would seem that way, but no. That’s another long story. You lost your parents right? I lost mine when I was eight. Walter took me in, trained me to be a shield—that means someone who travels with groups of people to protect them.”

“So do you have anyone then?”

“Naw, Eric, not really,” she smiled, then looked at me and she gasped and then hit me, “don’t you go thinking that, either!”

“What?” I asked, smiling.

“Not happening, solider. Plus you aren’t what I usually look for anyway. You’re not… soft enough.” she smiled again, this time I think from the look on my face.

“Sure. Okay.”

“Go to sleep, Eric.”

“Sure Jet. And thanks.”

“For what?”

“Everything. For not killing me the first time we met.”

“Sure, no problem. I have a soft spot for the lost,” she smiled.


 

 Eight – The Girl

 

The next day I got up early, leaving Jet and the rabbits still sleeping, to meet Karn outside the archery range. When I got there I was surprised to see her already waiting. Her eyes darted nervously, in a way they hadn’t the day before.

“Hey, ready to practice?”

“Sure. Listen Eric, would you mind if we took shots somewhere else?”

“I guess not. Why?”

“No reason. Look, too many people around here anyway. I want to take our time, not worry if people are waiting. I know of a glen over that hill about 10 minutes away. It’ll give us room. You can teach me your method. I can teach you how to draw a bow,” she smiled, grabbing my arm and pulling me away from the range.

It was a short walk through the summer fields. With the grass waist high we soon lost sight of the fairgrounds. I could see the tension melt away from Karn’s face the further away we got. We eventually found ourselves in low ground beside a small brook. The trees were larger, the air cooler, and no one was around as far as I could see. Karn herself took a quick look too. “Everything okay?” I asked.

“Yes, sure. Sorry. I had a fight with my father today. He objects to me coming out here. He thinks I should stay at home.”

“Well, okay, I guess. You have chores?”

“What, are you taking his side now?” Karn asked with a smile but I could detect a real question in there.

“No, no. I didn’t grow up with any sisters or brothers. They’d all moved away. I had to do all the chores. But the way I figure it, if you do all the stuff you have to then you can do whatever you want.”

“Even if it isn’t proper for a lady?”

I laughed, maybe too loudly. “Well m’lady , I didn’t mean to offend. I figured you were just a regular ol’ gal. I didn’t realize I was dealin’ with royal town folk.”

“What do you mean?” her face darkened, but I still didn’t get it.

“Sorry, I was just joking. Back where I come from there are two types of folks: people on the mountain and town folk. It’s the town folk who always put on airs, talking about what girls ought to do or not do. But up on the mountain you just do what needs to be done. My momma did everything my daddy did—maybe more. Heck, if she could’ve voted she would have been there right off. She weren’t afraid of no one and was no one’s fool.”

I looked up to see Karn smiling broadly. “She sounds like a great lady, maybe one day I could meet her?”

“No, hardly, she’s um dead.”

“I’m sorry.”

“You didn’t know. I suppose there’s a lot of stuff you don’t know—about me, I mean.”

We stood there for a moment, the sounds of the summer day beginning to get louder as the sun rose in the sky. I stood there for a moment and stared at her, she stared back. I found myself tipping into her deep brown eyes. I felt a strange sensation on my skin, like putting your hand under running water and you get a charge all over your body.

Finally Karn broke the spell. “Are we going to sit around all day talking or are you going to show me how you shoot that bow so fast?”

We spent the morning taking turns, showing each other what we knew about the bow…


There was silence from the old man. Riley thought maybe he had forgotten where he was, but then saw it was more like he was lost in thought. Finally the old man coughed, shifted in his seat.

“Ever been in love Riley? Really in love?”

“Sure, I guess Paw Paw. There’s a girl, a senior. She makes me feel special, like I’m the only one in the world. She and got to know each other when I got them detentions in the spring. I guess she’s trouble too, but I can’t help myself.”

The old man laughed, “Exactly. You know. It was like that. Maybe it was because we were alone, but it really did seem like the world had suddenly become so small, just the two of us. I can recall every moment of that day. I know I can. I remember the way the tall grass tickled my hands as we walked to retrieve arrows, how the bird songs seemed so loud in the quiet of the glen, Karn’s brown hair in the sun, her smile, and her laugh. I was pretty sure, right then, that I could spend a million years with her and not feel closer to her. “

“Did you kiss her Paw Paw?”

The old man laughed again. His eyes sparkled. “Yes, Riley, we kissed. It was towards evening. The sun was low, the breeze had died down. The world stopped spinning there for a moment…”


“Eric, I have to go now,” Karn told me suddenly. “I have to be back in town before dark.”

“Go with me to the fair, Karn. Let’s look around, play some of the games.”

“I can’t. My father wouldn’t like it.”

“Come on, Karn. We can break the rules just once. I’ll go back with you and explain.”

“No! I mean, no. Anyway, you are awfully brave to say that without knowing my father but no.”

I started to protest again, but the look on her face told me it was useless. Karn was unlike the girls at home, who would laugh and giggle and act stupid even if they weren’t Karn’s whole demeanor let you know that she put up with no fools.

We stood there awkwardly for a moment, I wasn’t sure what to do next. Finally I spoke.

“Okay, but can meet again here tomorrow? The tournament is only two days away.”

She bit her lip and thought about it for a moment. “Yes, okay.”

“Good, first thing?”

She nodded. I still stood there, like the inexperienced boy I was.

Karn turned to leave but then suddenly turned back around and hooked her arm around my neck, pulling my face towards hers. Yes, that was the kiss. It was the kiss. I had kissed a few girls at church socials and such but never like this. It shot through me like electricity. If there ever was a kiss that changes your whole life this was it, and I knew it right then too, right then and there I felt everything change. Everything.

 I swear when she finally broke away it almost hurt. When I opened my eyes she was looking at me with the strangest mix of happiness and fear. I thought maybe I had done something wrong.

“Karn, I—”

“I have to go now Eric. Meet me back here, tomorrow. Right here!”

I tell you I wanted to run after her with all my might, but I didn’t. Looking back I guess I should have been more concerned about how all of this was unfolding, but when you’re young you don’t ask a lot of questions—at least I didn’t. I was letting life wash over me—had been since I got to this place. It was like one of those hot summer days when you feel almost weak; you just let life happen and worry about tomorrow some other day.