Monday, October 31, 2016

Prolouge - Balloons

Hi,
OK, so this is it, the start of my Nanowrimo novel (that's National November Writing Month) - I actually started this one last November but go sidetracked around Thanksgiving (long story). SO I am going to try and finish it this year. To spur me on I am going to post daily posting of what I wrote already up on the blog, eventually catching up to what I am writing now. This is a quick and dirty process- which means that what I will post will have plenty of errors, grammar issues and typos. Bear with me.
Thanks
-D H Richards
PS - I need a new name for the novel, 1000 Balloons was already taken ;-)

Prolog


Liza woke in the night with a start. At first she was not sure if she had really heard anything. The window nearest her bed was open to let in the cool night air. So she thought perhaps she had heard a noise from the street. Although her neighborhood was a quiet one, even the best neighborhoods in London in 1901 had their fair share of noise at all hours, whether it was stray cats knocking over cans or even rag pickers going through the dustbins.

She lay still, trying not to breath. She listened for it again. There, a soft thump. It did not sound like it was coming from the street, rather from inside. In the light of the half-moon she could barely see the clock on her worktable. It was 2 in the morning. She doubted her Grandfather was up at this hour, perhaps it was one of the servants, but event that sounded doubtful. She told herself it may have just been something in the house. It was, after all, a fairly old house, built in the early 1800s along a very good street full of similar large row homes. Maybe it was mice or- there is was again!

She got out of bed. If it were her Grandfather, Liza thought, she should make sure he was alright. After all, he was getting older, and she had heard of people falling down in the middle of the night. She would just go down and check at his door, to see if he was ok. She slipped into a pair of pants under her night robe. Her grandfather would no doubt comment on her choice of pants, but she always felt somewhat naked under her night robe. She was keenly aware that at nineteen her body was often the object of stares from men (and women sometimes even). She did not want any of the servants she might run into in the halls to ogle her.

A quietly as she could she opened the bedroom door and went into the hallway. She knew her way around well enough not to need a light, plus the weak moonlight that came in through the windows at the end of the hall was enough to get her to the stairs. She crept down a flight to the second story, being sure to skip the two steps that squeaked. Stop stopped in front of her Grandfather’s door and listened for a moment. She was about to call out when she heard the noise again, this time it was coming distinctly from downstairs on the first floor. It sounded louder, like someone dropping something on thick carpet.

As quickly as she could go quietly she made her way down. She knew where the sound was coming from and her heart was beating rapidly. It was coming from her Grandfather’s study, which meant…

In front of the closed door to the study she steeled herself and then with a coordinated twist of the knob and a push of the door sprang into the room.

There, at the large ornate red oak desk, stood a man dressed all in black, shuffling through piles of paper. He looked up, his face obscured by a black mask. Without waiting Liza raced across the room, but the man had already moved himself and made for the open window on his side of the room. With a fluid grace he launched himself through the open sash in an arched dive and disappeared. By the time Liza got to the sill all she could see was a dark figure racing down the alleyway and hoping over a fence.

She knew if she gave chase or called for help that either way the man would be long gone. She turned around and surveyed the room. Books were pulled from shelves, drawers were emptied out. That must have been what she heard.

Just then the door to the study burst opened again and Rupert, the family’s butler appeared, bleary eyed.

“What on earth!” He exclaimed, but then quickly took in the scene and went over to Liza. “You alright Miss Liza?”

“Yes Rupert, thank you. There was a man in here…”

“A break in?”

“Yes. Is grandfather up?”

“I am now.” A gruff but warm voice said from the doorway. Liza’s Grandfather, Robert XXXXXX stood there. He was a large man, well over 2 meters tall and sturdy stock. In his younger day he, when he was fitter, he cut an imposing figure. He still was imposing, but his soft belly belied too many years of good food and wine and fewer days of hardship. “What happened here?”

“I heard a noise Grandfather, and came down here. I found a man looking through… wait! Do you think he was looking for-“

“Quite possibly!”

“Is it, is it still-?” Liza asked but the General was already striding across the room. He quickly grabbed a book from the shelf and opened it. He face fell into relief.

“Yes, yes, still here. Although, I shall have to move it now. Rupert, how did he manage to get in? I told you explicitly to lock all windows, especially those on the first floor.”

“Yes sir, but it seems that he cut a hole in this one.” Rupert stood by the wind through which the man had tumbled. A large hole had been cut, enabling someone to stick their hand inside and turn the sash lock.

“This is worrisome.”

“Yes Grandfather. I hope we get a response to our letter soon.”
 
“Yes, we should tomorrow in the post…”

Tuesday, October 25, 2016

November - posting new novel "in progress" thingy

OK- last November I got about halfway (a third?) through a "steampunk" type of novel. In an effort to get more of it done this November I am going to post 1500 word chunks of it up each day in November. I will be writing at the tail end of it as I post the from the front end - the idea being that as I get closer to the end of November I have enough done to continue posting.

One major note- what I will post will be a "raw edit" - pretty much as I write it- not corrected or proofed in an meaningful way. There will be plenty of typos, passive voice and incomplete sentences. But it is a chance to see some of the creative process. At the very least I hope to have something at the end I can go back and edit/correct for eventual publication.

Tune back in Oct 31 as I post the first bit as a teaser.

November - posting new novel "in progress" thingy

OK- last November I got about halfway (a third?) through a "steampunk" type of novel. In an effort to get more of it done this November I am going to post 1500 word chunks of it up each day in November. I will be writing at the tail end of it as I post the from the front end - the idea being that as I get closer to the end of November I have enough done to continue posting.

One major note- what I will post will be a "raw edit" - pretty much as I write it- not corrected or proofed in an meaningful way. There will be plenty of typos, passive voice and incomplete sentences. But it is a chance to see some of the creative process. At the very least I hope to have something at the end I can go back and edit/correct for eventual publication.

Tune back in Oct 31 as I post the first bit as a teaser.