Tuesday, November 1, 2016

Balloons - Chapter one

[here is the second 1500 word chunk- remember, this is a work in progress, so be kind! Feedback in the comment sis welcome!. ]


The next afternoon Liza bounded down the stairs two at a time. Liza had lived in the old house since she was a young girl and her parents had been tragically killed. Her Maternal Grandfather, her closest living relative, took her in. Her Grandfather, General Robert XXXXX, had served in his majesty’s army in any number of the empire’s far flung colonies. Although he had started in India, by the time he had rented, shortly before the arrival of Liza, he was stationed in Tanganyia as the head of the British Colonial army of East Africa. Upon his retirement he had purchased a large row house in one of London’s more fashionable neighborhoods. Friends of his had remarked that he bought too large a house, but the General had a large number of artifacts and he devoted many of the rooms of the house to displaying them. Unlike some his friends he did not have very many game trophies, he found the hunt boring and grossly unfair to the animal. He did, however, have a large number of scientific instruments he had collected from around the world. Celestial map making tools from India, precision compasses from Turkey, sea charts from New Zealand and codices from Timbuktu. Liza had a fee run of the large house with its many rooms stuffed with oddities.

Whether these rubbed off on Liza or Liza just came to it by genetics, the little girl who wandered into the large house became a young lady whose passion was tinkering with machines of all types. A few weeks after settling into the house she had asked her Grandfather for a table in which to set up small workshop. The General indulged her, after all he was frankly unsure if young girls were supposed to take machines apart to see how they worked or not. The General had never really given much thought to raising children and sort of assumed they could look after themselves for the most part. So, later, when she would ask for a specific tool or to be allowed to go with the kitchen maid to shop for spare parts, her Grandfather again indulged her.

 

By the time Liza was in her teen years she had blossomed into great beauty, tall, statuesque with a pleasant smile and long light brown hair. Wives of the General’s friends gossiped that it was all for naught however, that the young girls was only interested in machines, not boys. This was, perhaps, unfair, as Liza made many friends who were boys. In fact they were mostly boys. Boys shared her interests in machines, girls usually did not.

But beyond the discussion of mechanics or spring loaded turn keys, Liza was not interested much n boys, or anyone for that matter. She could spend hours in her room / workshop working on a device. It was only at her Grandfather insistence that she would occasionally go to formal parties. She always found them dreadfully boring and was sure to tell her Grandfather this. The General had to agree; he himself had never much liked the social aspects of his job and was glad to see the back of it. He would have allowed her to stay home altogether except that Liza herself found a small group of friends that shard her interests, or would at least let her go on about the latest mechanical marvel for a while before changing the subject on her.

Lately she had taken up an interest in ballooning. Often they used to get around, above the crowded streets of London; she had taken them for granted. Then one day her Grandfather’s Balloon’s gas jet had broken. It was with immense pleasure, and some pride on the part of her Grandfather, that Liza fixed the jet. This led her to examine, and eventually dismantle and rebuild, every aspect of her Grandfather’s balloon sedan. She had even begged him to book a flight on the channel balloon, an immense balloon with a large cabin hanging underneath. This balloon crossed the English Channel on a daily basis in order for Europe to be connected to England. That trip had been a highlight f Liza’s young life, and it whetted her appetite for more travel.

 

It had been a month before the break-in that her Grandfather had received a strange package in the post from a former friend of his. The friend has passed away and had entrusted a large packet of papers to the General. As the General sorted through them he came across a strange document.

The General had read the document over many times over the course of a few days. Finally he had called his Granddaughter into his study and asked her if she would up for a journey by balloon, one that could change the course of history.

Once she had calmed down, Liza agreed whole heartedly, promising to outfit the sedan with all of the latest gadgets and widgets she could find. The general thought this marvelous, but told her that they first had to find a man who lived in the North of England. They would send him an invitation to come down to England and discuss the document in question.

It was at that point that Liza had been allowed to read the document. Her eyes grew wider with each passing moment as she read it.

“Grandfather” she said, her voice almost breathless as she finished reading “This is incredible. Do you suppose it is even remotely true?”

“I do, or at least I believe that what was written down was said by this young man. My colleague was not one to make up stories. But this is why we must speak with this man as soon as possible. If what he said here is true-“

“It would change so much!”

“Yes.”

“When can he come then?”

“Well, I have sent him an invitation just today. I expect we would hear back soon. Meanwhile, we must keep this document very safe. I imagine there are people in this very city who would give a lot to see it.”

“But how will we keep it safe?”

“I will hide it in this study, but in a place no one would ever look. Hmmmm, ah yes!” The General got up from behind his desk and strode over to the large wall of bookcases and picked out a volume whose binding was dark green with golden letter. “Johnson’s Actuary Table for North Cumberland 1856. I cannot imagine a more benign place.”

“Aren’t you being a bit dramatic Grandfather? Do you really think anyone would even bother to look?”

“One never knows…”

 

 

 

So the morning after the break in Liza burst into her Grandfather’s study with a loud bang as she pushed the door open hard enough to make it hit the wall.

“Did we get a reply?” she asked breathlessly.

“I am afraid not” replied a deep baritone voice from behind a copy of the London Times. The man behind the paper, Liza’s Grandfather, hardly moved as he perused the evening paper. He did not seem the least bit disturbed by the sudden and loud appearance of his nineteen year old granddaughter.

“Perhaps he did not get the invitation then? Maybe it was lost in the mail?”

Slowly the old man lowered his newspaper and peered at Liza over pair of half-moon spectacles.

“Young lady, the British postal services does not lose the mail. I can assure that he received our letter.”

“But then why hasn’t he written back?”

“I am sure I do not know. God heaven girl! What are you wearing?” Liza’s grandfather put the paper on his lap and stared at her, his mouth open. Liza tiled her head at him with a question and then looked down at herself. She furrowed her eyebrows. Her work shirt was fairly clean, much cleaner than normal. Only a few oil stains were on it, plus one spectacularly crimson circle where red ink had spilled. Her pants were a different story; they were covered in black marks and dust. She gave them a quick brush, satisfied that all was put right.

“It is 1901 Grandfather; women can wear most anything they want. And you know I’m working Grandfather, I almost have the altimeter fixed too. But, no changing the subject. We don’t have but a few more weeks and if Mr. Micajah William Cogwright doesn’t answer soon-“

“I know, I Know! I am quite aware of the necessity for action young lady. If you like we can buzz out to Crumpleshire tomorrow first thing and call on Mr. Cogwright in person.”

Liza smiled. “Hooray! Thank you Grandfather! I know he’ll say yes. I mean, I think so, don’t you?”

“Yes dear.”

“Can I finish up before supper then?”

“Yes, run along. The bell will ring at eight I am told. Oh! That reminds me, I was not changing the subject. Colonel Thornsberry will be dining with us tonight-“

“Oh do we have to? I could just take a cold plate upstairs.”

“I am sorry you do not find Col. Thornsberry pleasant company young lady.”

“Oh no, it’s not that. It is just that you two will trade old war stories and I will have to sit there with a bemused expression on my face for hours…”

“Well, then you are in luck. I forgot to mention that he will be coming with his sister’s daughter, Mary something. She must be about your age too.”

“Oh, well then.” Liza smiled and bit her lip. She hated to complain, but she also was not looking forward to spending the night trade pleasant small talk with some stuck up socialite either. “I’ll be back down then at eight.” She turned and made a dash up the stairs.

“And dressed in proper clothes!” her Grandfather called after her.

“These are proper clothes!” She called back down.

“Not for a lady!”

“I’m not a lady!” Liza yelled and shut the door to her bedroom behind her.

Her grandfather stood at the landing looking up the stairs, shaking his head.

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