Thursday, November 17, 2016

Part 11 Balloons (NaNoWriMo novel work in progress, lots of stupid mistakes, plot holes, etc.)


Chapter Eleven

The following Saturday Liza found herself pacing the front hall dressed head to foot in a fine reproduction of a King George the third era ball grown. It was a golden yellow and had lacy detail but it bulged around her hips in a most uncomfortable way. She felt contracted by the corset she wore and weighed down by the endless hop skirts. She desperately wanted to scratch in itch she has on her back. How the hell was anyone an actual fan of these clothes, she thought to herself as she attempted to rub her back against a hallway table in a most indelicate, un Georgian kind of way.

Just then the doorbell rang and Rupert, the butler, appeared from around the stairs to answer the door. Liza thought Mary looked much better in her deep purple dress than she did in hers. Mary seemed almost radiant in it.

“My goodness Mary, you do wash up rather well.”

Mary gave a hearty laugh. “As do you Liza. I have to admire your dress, it looks like a radiant sun.”

“Oh, this old thing? I mean it Mary, this old, musty thing! I will be very glad to be done with this fool’s errand tonight.”

“You’re not getting cold feet are you?”

“Feet? No, but I am sure this damn corset is going to end up cutting me in half.”

“Well, then, I think we should get going while you are still whole.” Just then the Colonel stepped into the house behind Mary.

“Colonel Thornsberry, Grandfather is expecting you, come in.”

“Good evening Liza.” he said with a small bow. “Now I am sure your Grandfather has already talked to you-“

“Yes, he has, so no need for a repeat. Don’t look so shocked Colonel. I am not some wet behind the ears private when it comes to these social events. Whatever other failings Grandfather might be guilty of in raising me, he has always made sure I attended the right finishing classes and the right coming out parties. Now, I cannot say I enjoyed any of them or even tried very hard, but I think I can recall enough to fake it.”

“And Uncle, I will be with Liza.” Mary chimed in, sounding a bit too eager, “Mother has done a good deal more than even sending me to classes. She has very drilled me day and night about how to handle these affairs.”

“Truth be told I wasn’t worried about your social graces ladies, more about you skulking around Igsseldin’s house.”

“Ah that, no worries Colonel. I already have a plan to tell anyone I might run into that I was looking for the loo.”

The Colonel registered some schlock at this but soon he and Mary and Liza were laughing loudly.

Just then the General huffed into the hall, smoking a large clay pipe.

“Leave them alone Colonel. This is woman’s work after all.”

“Grandfather!” Liza said. “Honestly, we should send you and the Colonel in our place. And in these dresses!”

“Humph!” the Colonel said. “I should like to see the upstairs maid try and fit me into a corset!”

”Off you go then!” The General said. “Keep an eye on her” He told Mary “She’s libel to get us all in trouble before the night is over…”

 

Liza and Mary arrived at the Igsseldin’s house not a half an hour later. The house was a proper mansion, not connected to any other house, and took up half of a block in the best part of London. Its elaborate Victorian architecture loomed over the sidewalk as the two young women alighted from their cab up to the front door. They joined a steady stream of party goers making their way into the house. It was as if half of London was invited.

“At least we can get lost in the crowd” Liza said to Mary as she gave her invitation to the brutish butler that stood guard in the doorway.

While the night air had a certain chill to it, inside the large house was warm and brightly lit. Liza and Mary came into large entrance hall decked out in what seems like a market’s worth of flowers. Massive arrangements spilled out of large Chinese blue vases. To the left was a large opening frames by folded out French doors that led into a large ballroom. People streamed in and out of the ballroom through the opening, often 2-3 astride. From the ballroom came the sounds of what sounded like almost a full orchestra playing 18th century baroque music. Through the doorway Liza and Mary could see people dancing a Contredance. Off the right side of the hall way was a large room that held tables groaning with food.

“There must be several hundred people here.” Mary said fairly loudly so she could be heard by Liza, envy thought the two were only a few feet apart. They could scarcely get any closer because of their large hoop skirts.

“Yes, this is great, I think. You stay here and look around, see if you can talk to any servants, I am going to take a look around. Oh1 Pardon me!” Liza said as her large skirt bounced off of a gentleman behind her. “These things are impossible!”

“Very” Mary said, “How are we supposed to get about the house in these? We did not plan for this I guess.”

“Au contraire!” Liza said with a smile. “Follow me.”

Mary followed Liza down the large hall until it split into two at a “T.” Liza took a left and kept going until she came to the end. There was a small door next to a side table. She pulled on the handle and opened the door, just managing to squeeze her dress through. She turned to find Mary looking at her strangely.

“What? It’s the maid’s passage. All of these big houses have them. There’ll be a landing here, come on, come on!”

With some effort Mary got herself and her skirt through the narrow door. And, as Liza had said, there was a compact landing behind the door.

“This is where the maids can prepare things, like a tray or perhaps set up a table for cleaning the rooms. All of these houses have them, areas where the maids can do their work out of sight. Terrible, you know, but people want the maids to do everything for them, but not to actually see them doing it.”

“Well, it’s about the same out join the country Liza.” Mary said, distractedly looking around, her massive skirt bumping into the wall.  

“Now, I am still not sure how we are to get about the house.”

“Not we, just me. Watch Mary dear.” Liza took her left hand and reach roundabout halfway to her hip. She fiddled for a moment and then, as if by magic, the skirt around her fell off, leaving her in tan slacks.

“Hey!” Mary said, her face registering shock. “That’s cheating! Where are all of your ruffles and those endless stupid layers of material.”

“Well, I figured since this was all fake anyway, why not make it a good, useful fake. It’s just batting and a handy snap. Now, if you could be so good as to go back out and spy from the dance floor, I will skulk around. Perhaps you will meet nice boy and make your mother happy”

“I would much rather be sneaking around, but I suppose that isn’t very likely in this thing.” Mary said sourly. “Very well, I shall expect you back with in the half hour, if not sooner. Where will you leave your skirt?”

“Just here, on the landing. If a maid finds it I will shall say I got over heated.”

“Good idea. Do be careful Liza.”

“See you soon Mary, do not worry.”

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