Thursday, December 4, 2014

"Levels" (working Title) first draft done

ok
Kinda weird, but I finished up my first pass at Levels. (Still not sure about that title). It clocks in at a little over 52k words. I need to add a lot of polish to it etc.
The basic story deals with a guy called an "assist" who helps families deal with the "protocol" (the police). A guy, Mr. Mill,  is murdered and then a few days later his granddaughter goes missing. Is there a connection? (well, duh...) the story takes place in a city in which there are "levels" built up over time one layer on top of another. The lower the level you live on the worse off you are. Strict controls make it difficult to move between levels or work your way up. Our hero must make his way through these levels to determine what is going on and what the connection is between the killing of Mr. Mill and the disappearance of 12 women over several years at a local University.

Anyway, hopefully it will read better than my ham handed synopsis!

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